Richard Hawley

So me and my buddy put together a few (very) rough demos this week and I was wondering if anyone could spare a few minutes to have a listen and share some thoughts good, bad or indifferent.

The download is here
http://rapidshare.com/files/410057422/Civil_War.mp3.html

Anything would be really appreciated

Thanks guys

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ok i'll have a go. I like the tune. I know it's only a rough recording but I think the vocals need to be much higher in the mix & with less reverb, acoustic much lower, & thought the piano was a bit intrusive over the vox at times. But again, good tune, nice one.

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oh yeah for sure- it was recorded with the internal mic on my laptop so that accounts for the lack of quality and why we had to put so much reverb on, cos otherwise it just sounded really thin and awful- but ill give it and the other stuff a go

thanks for that mate

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Lovely stuff.
I think Snapper nailed it with his comments apart from the piano which,in my opinion,was fine.
Don't forget to post the finished article.

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thanks for the help guys- did a remix- sounds a lot better, but I'm a bit self conscious about my singing so you know... whether its better with less or more ill leave other people to decide but anyway

http://rapidshare.com/files/410938959/Civil_War_remix.mp3.html

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The sound of loneliness makes me happier